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Weather: Leaf-fall, Morning
Leaf-fall has come upon the Clans. Frequent cold rains and gusts of powerful winds torment the cats of the ruins. As the sun rises over the desecrated city its rays warm the backs of the cats living in its shadows.

Leader: Bumblestar (@Aquastar)
Deputies: Kestrelthorn (@Willowstorm)
Medicine cats: Peachwhisker (@Leopardspots), Chervilfang (@Daisyleap)
Medicine apprentices: Mosspaw (@Davewing),

Leader: Sleekstar (@Willowstorm)
Deputies: Loftwing (@Aquastar)
Medicine cats: Wasplight (@Quake), Covewhisper (@Feather)
Medicine apprentices: Lynxpaw (@Wishflight), {reserved}

Leader: Spiderstar (@Quake)
Deputies: Jadescorch (@Feather), Stagheart (@Leopardspots)
Medicine cats: Flurryfeather (@Metzi),
Medicine apprentices: Foxpaw (@Lily)

Leader: Hauntstar (@Leopardspots)
Deputies: Doespirit (@Doespirit),
Medicine cats: Fogberry (@Willowstorm), Pearldapple (@Aquastar)
Medicine apprentices: Saffronpaw (@Feather),
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Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Mon 08 Oct 2018, 8:42 am
PINEWHISKER
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22 moons » PathClan » warrior » male

Name Reason
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Pine- (noun) an evergreen coniferous tree that has clusters of long needle-shaped leaves. 

He was given this prefix for his brown tabby coat resembling the bark of a pine tree.

-whisker (noun) a long projecting hair or bristle growing from the face or snout of many mammals.

He was given this suffix for his outstanding hunting abilities.

Appearance
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Pinewhisker is a stocky brown tabby tom with green eyes. He has black stripes and faint grey spots along the end of his tail, underbelly, and hind legs. He has a chiseled diamond-shaped head with a red nose and white markings underneath his muzzle. Pinewhisker has a plumy tail and tall ears with intensified hearing. His overall build is rather chubby but he can actually outrun most of his Clanmates.

Personality
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Pinewhisker comes off as pretty rude, with no care for the feelings of others except his mate. He is quick to judge anyone he meets, unafraid to point out their faults with his sarcastic tone. He isn't someone to go to if you need some hope: he's very pessimistic and doesn't tolerate most kits. He is, however, extremely intelligent, and he always makes sure to take his time before making a decision. A softness and gentleness is hard to awaken, but surely enough it shows whenever he's around someone he adores. He hopes his kits will be well-behaved, and he plans to teach them everything he knows before they leave the nursery.

Skills
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☾ Fighting | 5 ☽
☾ Hunting | 8 ☽
☾ Fishing | 5 ☽
☾ Swimming | 4 ☽
☾ Climbing | 7 ☽
☾ Running | 8 ☽
☾ Stamina | 5 ☽
☾ Strength | 6 ☽
☾ Scent | 4 ☽
☾ Eyesight | 4 ☽
☾ Hearing | 4 ☽
☾ Memory | 3 ☽
☾ Herb Lore | 1 ☽
☾ Agility | 7 ☽

Family
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Mother ▹ Leafpath [deceased]
Father ▹ Wolfscorch [alive, open]
Brother ▹ Oakstrike [alive, open]
Mate ▹ Birchfrost [alive, @Aquastar]
Kits ▹ expecting three

History
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Pinewhisker was born alongside his one brother, Oakstrike. They were very playful and mischievous like the usual kits, and when they became apprentices they trained a lot together. The two of them loved to play pranks on other apprentices all of the time, and they were often breaking the rules by going farther into the tunnel system where they lived than they were supposed to. The two of them would always ask the she-cats to come with them, but they denied every time. Eventually, Pinepaw and Oakpaw grew more mature, even though their mentors were both quite witty and were not as strict as they expected. After passing the final tests, the two inseparable brothers became warriors. A few days later, Leafpath passed from old age, which took quite a toll on both of them. Oakstrike had definitely been closer to her, since they were much more similar in views, but Pinewhisker still grieved for the she-cat who raised him to be the warrior he was. When he was around 18 moons, he met Birchfrost, and she took his mind off things. He knew she was the perfect mate, and now they are expecting a litter of three. Despite his dislike for kits in the past, he is excited for something to focus on rather than just hunting every day.


Last edited by Daisyleap on Wed 05 Dec 2018, 2:38 pm; edited 6 times in total

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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Thu 15 Nov 2018, 7:09 pm
needs work
Finish history and you'll be good

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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Mon 03 Dec 2018, 3:15 pm
Pinewhisker is finished!

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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Mon 03 Dec 2018, 9:34 pm
So we changed the rules, can you please get rid of the quotes in the middle of the audition. We're only allowing one per audition now.
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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Tue 04 Dec 2018, 3:01 pm
Cool beans, it's fixed Smile

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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Tue 04 Dec 2018, 3:03 pm
Accepted haha yes!!

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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Tue 04 Dec 2018, 6:26 pm
un ack CEP TA BLE Sorry, too many things wrong with the history. I’ll edit this when I can with the points that need to be changed

EDIT: Okay so

1) PathClan lives underground in a subway/tunnel system. The 'borders' aren't well defined, as they often come up in other Clans' territories, and there is no 'unmapped' section where they could possibly get lost

2) If they did somehow end up on the other Clans' territories, they would be blinded. Sunlight hurts PathClan cats to the point that it pretty much burns their corneas, and 9/10 times makes them permanently blind.

3) The way that it's described, it sounds like Pinewhisker's mother is only 18 moons when she dies

4) there are no rogues near the Clans.
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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Wed 05 Dec 2018, 2:38 pm
I just redid it and made it simpler, is that okay?

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Re: Pinewhisker of PathClan

on Wed 05 Dec 2018, 4:00 pm
Ye sounds good
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